Thursday, December 4, 2008

Christmas at the Ramada by Dawn Potter


In response to my request for guest contributors, Dawn just sent me an excerpt from a longer, 4-part poem that is coming out in 'How the Crimes Happened' (CavanKerry Press, 2010). I know few other living poets who I find this pleasurable to read. Thanks Dawn for sharing. Happy Holidays and enjoy!


1. The Lobby

Ramada nearly rhymes with armada
a disarming coincidence, O notes,
as she shoves apart the glass doors

for lingering K and they step into
a Wonderland of holiday cheer
so cheerless she pictures just how hard

the squirrel-faced girl at the front desk
must have laughed when, the day
after Thanksgiving, a burly crew

of Portuguese teens crammed the pale
lobby with misshapen Edwardian carolers
and a giant twitching Santa with a gold-

lamé belt and a broken nose. Across the grubby
carpet, two mechanical elves lugubriously
negotiate a seesaw; the check-in counter

is bestrewn with large rats sporting Mr. and Mrs.
Claus outfits; and toward the lounge, a pair
of handyman snowmen wash and sweep

with the enthusiasm of wind-up convicts.
“Ramada/armada, ramada/armada,”
murmurs O. The air is lightly filled

with the tones of Christmas carols
so faint they might be the rustling
of bat wings. The lobby smells of dust

and industrial rug shampoo.
Beyond the night-time glass, asphalt looms.
The lights of Route 6 tout good prices

and fun. Cars stuffed with after-dinner
shoppers mutter past, tires scraping sand,
satisfaction imminent as a blizzard. O signs up

for a smoking room, a king-sized bed. K thumbs
postcards and examines a rat. In their veins,
the spirit of Christmas surges like bourbon.